Monday, May 28, 2018

Query Critique

Happy Memorial Day and happy query critique time!  For everyone who enters (and those who don't) spread the word so that even if you don't submit a query, you encourage others to read and comment.  Thanks :)



If you're not familiar with how to enter, take a look at my previous post to read the rules.  Good luck!  

3 comments:

  1. Real spell caster to bring your ex lover back and save your marriage (Oguguspellcaster@gmail.com /Whatsapp+2348081594908)
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  2. Hello friends, I'm Andrea Maria from Stockholm-Sweden. I'm new here on this blog, i don't really know much how things work out here but i have read good testimonies how to restore lost relationship and to make a marriage work online blog comment section and i also want to add little of my own life experience this will be helpful to many of us here who are seeking for answers and solution to relationship problems, like getting back with ex love partner, how to save a broken marriage and how to stop divorce.
    Read my true life marriage story, After being married to my husband Anderson, for 9 years we have no child of our own, i was unable to get pregnant after so many years of marriage. This was a big problem i was having with my husband Anderson, he believe all hope is gone and fault was mine not to get pregnant, he broke-up with me because of this same issue of not able to get pregnant, I explained to him and did everything possible to make him understand to bring him back home, I visited medical doctors for personal counseling, I want my husband back into my life i love him so much. I prayed him to return with everything, i made promises to him and family members talked with him that the problem is not mine not having a child but he refused. I explained my marriage problem to my best-friend, a colleague at work office and she suggested that I would rather contact a Spiritualist Love-spell caster to return my husband home and bless me with fruit of womb. I have already read so much online about this same spellcaster man that my friends advised me to contact Dr.Oduduwa the great herbalist from a tropical Sahara afrikana region, that can help me launched a love-spell to get husband back home to me, but I'm the kind who never liked to believe in spiritual power or spells, I had no choice i gave it a try, I send message to Oduduwa private contact address the spelling channel. Oduduwa told me he can help me, he assure me there was no problem with me that everything will be fine within 7 days of spelling and enchantment prayers, I believe and waited patiently for the seventh day to come because i can't wait to see my heart desires come true. Oduduwa the Spiritual spellmaster threw the spelling into air, and did every other spelling charms on my behalf in his temple at mid-night.
    Surprisingly the second day it was around 16.00AM. I received a phone call from unknown number, behold Anderson my husband calling me on phone, I was so happily amazed, I answered my phone call, behold it was my husband voice, we had a long conversation and apologize to me. he return back home within 7 days as Oduduwa has said it. Two months after i was feeling somehow feverish, i visited family doctor for check-up, behold i was three weeks pregnant after my husband return back home.
    I am so happy today because just last month i gave birth to a baby boy, after so many years in marriage without having a child, Oduduwa lunched a charm spell to return my husband back home to me and he prepared a herbal, roots traditional concussion medicine for giving me pregnancy to have a child.
    The joy and happiness of heart is too much, I already promised Oduduwa to share my good news testimony of his good work after result is out successful, its was very easy and simple for me working and following Dr.oduduwa instructions. It perfectly work for me without any side effect. I have this good intention to share this good news out here, so as anyone having similar marriage/ relationship crisis to contact
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  3. I am one of those people who said, “I’ll never call a psychic or a magician or whatever” to help me with my problems – least of all my love problems, but I reached the point where I knew I needed some guidance, and I’m so glad I found this man called dr.ajeghe. When I nearly lost David in one of our stupid,fights (he broke up with me), I thought I had lost everything.i cry all day and think that he will never come back to me again.i read so many testimony about Dr. ajeghe love spell,how he help to bring back ex lover back.I quickly email him.and also get back my husband with his love spell. And when I was at my most desperate,he didn’t take advantage of me. You performed a very good service for a person in true need. I don’t know how you did it, or how this magic works, but all I know is, IT WORKS!! David my husband and I are happily back together, and I’ll always be grateful to dr.ajeghe email him for any kinds of help is very capable and reliable for help ajeghespelltemple@gmail.com or WhatsApp him +2349069171173




























































































































    I am one of those people who said, “I’ll never call a psychic or a magician or whatever” to help me with my problems – least of all my love problems, but I reached the point where I knew I needed some guidance, and I’m so glad I found this man called dr.ajeghe. When I nearly lost David in one of our stupid,fights (he broke up with me), I thought I had lost everything.i cry all day and think that he will never come back to me again.i read so many testimony about Dr. ajeghe love spell,how he help to bring back ex lover back.I quickly email him.and also get back my husband with his love spell. And when I was at my most desperate,he didn’t take advantage of me. You performed a very good service for a person in true need. I don’t know how you did it, or how this magic works, but all I know is, IT WORKS!! David my husband and I are happily back together, and I’ll always be grateful to dr.ajeghe email him for any kinds of help is very capable and reliable for help ajeghespelltemple@gmail.com or WhatsApp him +2349069171173

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