It's time for the first query critique of 2016! For everyone who enters (and those who don't) spread the word so that even if you don't submit a query, you encourage others to read and comment. Thanks :)
If you're not familiar with how to enter, take a look at my previous post to read the rules. Good luck! And don't forget to post any questions you want me to answer in the comments section with the hashtag #IHAVEAQUESTION!